Wednesday, January 30, 2019

Culture and Identity: An Introduction

Today's Goal: Learn what cultural identity is and how it affects us as individuals. 

The Plan:
  1. Read
  2. Intro to Unit 4
  3. Cultural Identity
  4. Change your Google Profile Picture to be an appropriate picture of YOU or of your Initials.
  5. Catch up Time

Unit Question: How does cultural identity shape a person's experience within a community?

You will find this question on Google Classroom. Answer to the best of your ability. This is a quickwrite, which means: get all your ideas out regardless of whether they are right or wrong. To an extent, this is an opinion. There isn't a right or wrong, there is only answering it or not answering it.

Cultural Identity
You will need a piece of paper for this.






Reminders/Homework:
  • I wasn't kidding about your one-pager. If you didn't turn it in today, Turn it in ASAP.
  • I'm also not kidding about the profile picture. Change it.
  • If the No Red Ink Diagnostic is not done, you'll need to do that as well.


Sunday, January 27, 2019

House Cleaning

Today's Goal: There are a few things I need to happen today since I am not here. 



The Plan:
  1. Watch the video above as a class
  2. Read
  3. Finish A Cry in the Wild if you did not finish it.
  4. Watch the videos below on your own to learn what you need to do and go do them.
  5. If you finish everything, read.

No Red Ink Diagnostic #2
  1. Watch the video
  2. Go take the new diagnostic assessment on No Red Ink.



Independent Reading One-Pager

Last class I asked you to bring one book you recently read to class.

Here's why: You're about to learn what I will be requiring you to do for your 3rd quarter independent reading, and you're going to practice with a book you have already read.

I don't really care if you have a book with you or not. You have access to the internet, to my library, to the school library, and to your memory. Keep in mind that I have a record of the books you have read here. If it's not on this list, I do not think I should be receiving an assignment about it. If you don't remember it, you have resources to help you remember it. If you can remember how to press the right buttons and what the map looks like on Fornite, you can remember a book you read or figure it out.







Directions:
 □ Must be on standard sized (8 ½ x 11), unlined paper (any color)
□ Use color pens or markers, unless black and white is the BEST design choice.
□ Write your MLA heading on the BACK.
□ Be creative and thoughtful. It is meant to be a challenge to truly represent your experience of a book in such a small space.

□ Arrange the following required elements on the page in any way you choose (ALL are required):

  1.  Title and author of the book featured prominently on the page
  2. A summary of the plot (2-3 sentences in your OWN words. Do not write an advertisement. Write a summary.)
  3. In words or images: Name(s) and brief description(s) of the main character(s). 
  4. In words or images, describe the setting: time period, place(s), etc
  5. Include two vocabulary words with definitions (and optional illustrations). Choose words from the book that were unfamiliar to you. Include the page number where each word is found. 
  6. Quotations: find and copy two to three quotes (this means wording taken directly from the novel, not just what a character says), that struck you as powerful, interesting, puzzling, important, thought-provoking, informative, confusing, well-written, etc. Be sure to put these in quotation marks! In addition, write one to two sentences per quote about why you chose that particular quote. Be sure to include the page number where the quote is found.
  7. Have at least one graphic representation: a drawing, magazine picture, etc that relates to the book you read and the quotes you chose. What visual images were created in your mind as you read? This image can be of something that is discussed specifically in the reading, something that the reading reminded you of, or a picture that conveys any idea or feeling you got from the reading. Any sort of drawing, painting, or graphic representation is acceptable. In other words, you are not writing what you imagined; you are showing me what you imagined!  


 In addition:
□ Fill the entire page (very little white space left showing).
□ Writing must be in ink or typed… no pencil.
If your One-Pager lacks one or more elements, seems to be put together with very little effort, or is otherwise poorly done, you may have it returned to you to do over.

Reminders/Homework:
  • One-Pager due next class, at the beginning of class.
  • Read your independent reading book.

Wednesday, January 23, 2019

Revision and Movie




Today's Goal: Revise if necessary. Finish your essay if necessary. Watch A Cry in the Wild.

The Plan:
  1. Read
  2. Watch the video
  3. HERE IS YOUR RUBRIC.
    IT IS VERY IMPORTANT.
  4. Revise and/or watch the movie

Reminders/Homework:
  • ESSAY DUE FRIDAY 6PM (like, tomorrow)
  • Read your independent reading novel.
  • Bring a copy of a book you have recently read to next class if you can. It should be one you have FINISHED and remember, or one you are very very close to finishing.


Editing Checklist:

Tuesday, January 22, 2019

Explanation and Conclusions

Today's Goal: Essay!

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.6.1.B
Support claim(s) with clear reasons and relevant evidence, ...demonstrating an understanding of the topic or text.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.6.1.C
Use words, phrases, and clauses to clarify the relationships among claim(s) and reasons.

The Plan:
  1. Read
  2. Expanding on your reasoning and Explanation part of R.A.C.E.S (or RACEEECEES)
  3. Conclusions
  4. Work time.

Expanding on Evidence

Below is what the rubric says about your evidence and reasoning (explanation)
It is scored on a scale of 1 through 4. Which is which?

1: Below Grade-Level
2: Approaching Grade-Level
3: At Grade-Level
4: Above Grade-Level

I will give you and your table four paragraphs.
Your job is to decide which achieves which rubric score.

EGUSD CCSS Rubrics by Elk Grove Unified School District is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial 4.0 International License.
Based on a work at http://blogs.egusd.net/ccss/educators/ela/rubrics-k-12/.


Conclusion Paragraphs

The entire purpose of a conclusion paragraph is to sum up the essay and to answer the question: So what? Why does it all matter at all?

If you aren't sure, you're going to have to discuss it with some people to figure it out, but here are some ideas for your ending:

  • Explain why the character change, the way that Brian became, is important in the real world.
  • Explain why Brian's character change is important to HIM even after he leaves the wilderness. You have to connect it to things that are not related to surviving in the wilderness, though. You might talk about what he talks about in the epilogue
  • Relate it back to the unit question: “What are the most important character traits for survival in a dangerous situation?
I don't want to tell you how to end your essay, but I do want to tell you that you need to come up with a reason that this change matters, and who it matters to. It could matter to Brian, it could matter to all people, and it could matter to specific kinds of people. You have to decide, and you have to decide why and SAY it. 

You could also watch this video if you want. I don't put them on here for no reason.




Reminders/Homework:
  • NEW DUE DATE FOR ESSAY:
    • Friday, January 25, 6pm
    • All classes due on this day. 
    • Get it done so that you can have the weekend.
  • Turn in your copies of Hatchet to the library as soon as possible.
  • Read your independent reading novel!
  • Note: Assuming you don't waste your time or my time, you will get to watch the movie at the end of this week. Don't blow it.

Thursday, January 17, 2019

Blending Quotes, Writing Body Paragraphs

Today's Goal: For the most part, see previous post. We're still writing.

The Plan:
  1. No Red Ink Capitalization Assessment
    It's like a quiz, but far less stressful, and literally is exactly what you did for 4 weeks on No Red Ink unless you didn't do it at all.
  2. Read when you're done
  3. Blending Quotes
  4. Write!

Blending Quotes
Okay so there is a powerpoint you can use below, but we're going to practice this together today. 

You will need:

  1. Socrative.com
  2. This quote, because it's the one we're going to practice with:
"They would not return. He would never leave now, he would never get out of here. He went down to his knees and felt the tears start, cutting through the smoke and ash on his face, silently falling onto the stone" (PG 117).
Ask yourself:

  • Do I need ALL of this quote? Can I just use part of it and paraphrase the rest?
  • Is it missing an in-text citation or is the in-text citation incorrect? (yes, it's incorrect)
  • What is going on in the story right now?
  • Is there any information I need to explain in order to understand this moment in the story?

Some possible sentence starters:
  • Paulsen states, "__
  • Paulsen writes, "__
  • Brian thinks, "__
  • When _______, Brian realizes that "____________

Important DON'TS:
  • Do NOT write the page number in your sentence
    • On page 346 it says, "__"
  • Do NOT write the word "quote" or "evidence" in your sentence.
    • The quote is "___"
  • Do NOT use personal pronouns
    • "My evidence is when Brian _____
    • I found the quote that says "____"
  • Don't forget the in-text citation

Reminders/Homework:
  • Your goal is to have a full essay written by the time you show up to class next week.
  • We will use that day to revise and improve. No real writer writes without revising, and you are practicing to be a real writer.
  • Read a novel

Tuesday, January 15, 2019

Let's Start Writing.

If you're looking for a visual way to
outline, plotting things with index
cards is a well-known strategy for
organizing evidence and structure.
Today's Goal: WRITING
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.6.1.A
Introduce claim(s) and organize the reasons and evidence clearly.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.6.1.B
Support claim(s) with clear reasons and relevant evidence, ...demonstrating an understanding of the topic or text.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.6.1.C
Use words, phrases, and clauses to clarify the relationships among claim(s) and reasons.

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.6.1.D
Establish and maintain a formal style.

The Plan:
  1. Read
  2. Essay Prompt
  3. Organizing your Essay
  4. Writing!

Essay Prompt

CLICK HERE for the overall essay guidelines and prompt. They are very clear about what goes into this essay. 

PROMPT: In the novel, Hatchet, by Gary Paulsen, how does Brian Robeson’s
 characterization change from the beginning of the story to the end?

Please note in the directions linked above that your essay will be four paragraphs long. Your body paragraphs will not be small. They will be big. They will be a lot of sentences. They will not be lazy.

Organizing Your Essay

Alright, today we start writing, but it involves some organization first.

There are basically two ways to organize this essay. There may be others, but which way you organize your essay kind of depends on your thesis.

Option #1: Before and After (Old and New)
  • Body paragraph 1 = Evidence and explanation of what Brian was like before his changes.
  • Body paragraph 2 = Evidence and explanation of what Brian was like after his changes
Option #2: Specific Character Trait Changes
  • Body paragraph 1 = Explain one way that he has changed by giving evidence and explanation of how he was the opposite before and how he has become that now.
    • Example: Evidence 1 is about how he was dependent
                      Evidence 2 in this paragraph demonstrates how he became independent.
  • Body paragraph 2 = Explain another way that he has changed by giving evidence and explanation of how he was the opposite before and how he has become that now.
    • Example: First evidence demonstrates how he was emotional, and your second piece of evidence demonstrates how he became stronger and more emotionally stable.

Writing!
I have attached a number of resources to Google Classroom, but you can use as many or as few as you want. Your body paragraphs need lots of time and effort, though, because rushing or being lazy will not show off your writing skills. You will need to challenge yourself to dig deeper than you would normally do. 
Body Paragraphs need to follow the RACE format, but it is a MODIFIED RACE format.

BODY PARAGRAPH STRUCTURE:
  • RA - Topic sentence that addresses what the paragraph will be about
  • C - Evidence #1 in a complete sentence
  • E - what's the significance of this evidence?
  • E - how does it prove that Brian has that character trait?
  • E - more if needed. E IS THE MOST IMPORTANT.
  • probably a sentence here to transition from one piece of evidence to the next.
  • C - Evidence #2 in a complete sentence
  • E - what's the significance of this evidence?
  • E - how does it prove that Brian has that character trait?
  • E - more if needed. E IS THE MOST IMPORTANT.
  • S - Sum it up and help transition to the next paragraph.

At the minimum, that means your body paragraphs will be eight sentences OR MORE. 


DO YOU NEED EVIDENCE? YES. 
IS THERE A RESOURCE FOR THAT? YES.


Reminders/Homework:
  • Are you reading at home? You should be. It's not homework, it's a lifestyle.
  • There will be a No Red Ink Capitalization Quiz next class. This is your fair warning. Maybe tell your friends if you see this.
  • Essay Due Date
    • Period 1, 3, 5: Tuesday, January 22 by the end of the school day
    • Period 4, 6: Wednesday, January 23 by the end of the school day


Friday, January 11, 2019

Summary and Thesis - Creating the framework for your expository essay.

Today's Goal:
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RL.6.2
Determine a theme or central idea of a text and how it is conveyed through particular details; provide a summary of the text distinct from personal opinions or judgments.


The Plan:
  1. Read
  2. Hatchet Summary
  3. Hatchet Thesis
Hatchet Summary
You will need a sticky note and a collaborative attitude for this activity.

You will work with a group (your group might change) to write the best possible two-three sentence summary of Hatchet that you can.

This is sort of what your paper will visually look like when
you're done with the summary activity.
Here are the steps:

  1. On your sticky note, write a two-sentence summary of Hatchet. Seriously. two sentences. Write small, and write ONLY what is needed to understand the story. Think about it before you write it, because you only get the one shot.
  2. Read your summary to your group. Together, combine forces to create one NEW summary that can be two or three sentences. Pick the best words and the most clear information

HINT: Your summary should start with one of two things:
  • In the novel, Hatchet, by Gary Paulsen, Brian Robeson is ________
  • The novel, Hatchet, by Gary Paulsen, is about ________


Hatchet Thesis
CLICK HERE for the overall essay guidelines. These will be discussed in depth in the next week or so, so don't feel overwhelmed yet.

PROMPT: In the novel, Hatchet, by Gary Paulsen, how does Brian Robeson’s
 characterization change from the beginning of the story to the end?


On Google Classroom, type your thesis. I'm giving you back your first draft today, from when you answered this question on the back of the "Old brian/new Brian" heads. Here's the deal: if you did NOT use any of the words that you put in his heads in your answer on the back, you will need to do so in your thesis today. That's why we brainstormed them! Some of you will be able to just type what you wrote and be done! Yay!

Some sentence frames you could use for your thesis:

  • Before his troubles began, Brian was ____ and ____ because ________, but after he had been stranded for weeks, Brian became _____ and _____ because _______.
  • In the beginning of the story, Brian is ______, but by the end of the story, Brian has changed to become more _____ because _______. 
  • After he realized _______________, Brian became more _________ and _______. Before that realization, Brian was a _____ person because ___________, but he changed because __________.



Reminders/Homework:
  • READ a book!
  • No Red Ink Sentence Parts: independent clauses, FANBOYS, and dialogue
  • If you have finished any books, please make sure you fill out the "I Finished A Book" form on the sidebar.
    • The end of the quarter is next Friday. 
      • If you have missing assignments, I need them by next Wednesday, January 16. 
      • Submit Revision Requests
      • I'm out of town next weekend, so grades are going in by Friday, January 18.

    Wednesday, January 9, 2019

    Gathering Evidence: NEW Brian

    Today's tasks should look VERY familiar.

    Today's Goal: Gather evidence to discover "new" Brian's characteristics and personality traits.

    The Plan:
    1. Read
    2. Finish Hatchet!
    3. "New Brian" Evidence Tracker

    Reminders/Homework:
    • READ a book!
    • No Red Ink Sentence Parts: independent clauses, FANBOYS, and dialogue
    • If you have finished any books, please make sure you fill out the "I Finished A Book" form on the sidebar.
      • The end of the quarter is next Friday. 
        • If you have missing assignments, I need them by next Wednesday, January 16. 
        • Submit Revision Requests
        • I'm out of town next weekend, so grades are going in by Friday, January 18.







      Monday, January 7, 2019

      Old Brian vs. New Brian

      Today's Goal: CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RL.6.3
      Describe how a particular story's or drama's plot unfolds in a series of episodes as well as how the characters respond or change as the plot moves toward a resolution.
      The Plan:
      1. Winter Break Reading Goal: How'd you do?
        Respond to your original goal on Google Classroom. There is an example posted.
      2. READ! YAY!
      3. Hatchet - Read Chapter 16 AND 17 and place stickies on evidence of what NEW Brian is like as a person. Don't forget to write why you marked it on your sticky.
      4. Old Brian Vs. New Brian 
      Old Brian vs. New Brian
      I'm giving you a graphic organizer to use for this. 

      DIRECTIONS:
      On the back of your sheet, answer the following question:
      How has Brian changed over the course of the novel?
      (Hint: answering this in 1-2 sentences, but with detail,
      will hopefully turn into your thesis for your essay! Yay!)
      1. In each of Brian's heads, draw pictures or write words to represent what Brian is like as a person or what his attitude is. 
      2. In between Old and New, write any similarities you see between old Brian and new Brian
      3. On the lines below each head, paraphrase at least one example from the story for old and new Brian.
      4. On the back of your sheet, answer the following question: How has Brian changed over the course of the novel? (Hint: answering this in 1-2 sentences, but with detail, will hopefully turn into your thesis for your essay! Yay!)






      Reminders/Homework:
      • No Red Ink Sentence Parts: independent clauses, FANBOYS, and dialogue
        • DUE Friday January 11at 6pm for ALL students
      • If you have finished any books, please make sure you fill out the "I Finished A Book" form on the sidebar.
      • The end of the quarter is next Friday. 
        • If you have missing assignments, I need them by next Wednesday, January 16. 
        • I'm out of town next weekend, so grades are going in by Friday, January 18.