September 30-October 1 - Esperanza Rising and Citing Evidence

Today's Goal: 

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RL.6.1
Cite textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.

Today's Agenda:

1. Entrance Question in the Chat: What is a skill you don’t have yet but wish you did? Why?
2. Announcements/Screencast Overview
3. Esperanza Rising Chapter - Las Almendras (7)
4. Writing Task: Cite the Evidence
5. Esperanza Rising Chapter - Las Ciruelas (8)

 

End of Class Checklist (Did I finish these things?):

• Daily Exit Form
• CLICK HERE for the WHOLE BOOK of Esperanza Rising. Having the whole book will be helpful, I promise.
• Writing Task: Cite the Evidence
• Typing.com - did you sign up? I am missing a little less than half of my students.
  • Click here to join (Links to an external site.) - you MUST use your school google account to sign in. DO NOT type a username and password. NO TYPING. Just click "Sign in with Google."
  • Here is a breakdown of lessons to complete each week (Links to an external site.). Here's this week's:
    
    • • Beginner Review 1
      • T, S, and L Keys
      • O, B, and A Keys

 

Screencast Overview:

 

Las Almendras (7)

Discussion Questions: 

• How has Esperanza's life changed? 
• How has Esperanza changed? Has she changed at all?
• What is all this conversation about striking mean? Why might they strike? Why could striking be a bad thing for them?

 

Today's Writing Task: CITE THE EVIDENCE

Click Here to go to the Assignment.

Today your only goal is Citing the Evidence in the correct format. 

I notice that we are still struggling with this, and we are going to become EXPERT CITERS.

C stands for "Cite the Evidence" and it's maybe the most important new skill we're going to practice together this year. It is ONE sentence that means you are going to copy a quote from the text and provide an in-text citation. An in-text citation is what you put at the end of a quote to prove where the quote came from. 

Here is what it looks like. It has a VERY specific format!

 

Every C sentences has THREE PARTS:

1. Introductory Phrase
   examples:
         The author writes, "
         Asimov states, "
         Margie says, "
         The writer explains that "
         After _____, Esperanza thinks, "
         
2. The Quote
         The quote has to be EXACTLY as written in the text
         The quote has to have quotation marks around it
   
   
3. In-text Citation
         You put the author's LAST name (capitalize it) and the page number in parentheses. JUST a number. Do not write the word "page" or "pg" or "#". Then you put the period at the VERY END of the sentence.  
   
   (Martin 34)
   (Pilkey 97)
   (Stiefvater 123)

Examples:

At the end of the chapter, Rowling writes, "All was well" (Rowling 759). 

The author finishes the chapter by stating that "All was well" (Rowling 759).

 

Here is your PROMPT:

In "Las Almendras," Esperanza learns about why members of their community might want to strike and why it might be dangerous. Find a piece of evidence from the story that explains what she learns. You must write it in a complete sentence with an introductory phrase, the quote EXACTLY from the story, and the in-text citation.

 

You have two options: 

1. You can write a WHOLE RACE PARAGRAPH (this is a great choice if you really want to show off and push yourself). Your "Cite the Evidence" sentence is going to be the best evidence sentence you've ever written in your life.
2. You can write ONE SENTENCE: Your one sentence is going to be the most perfect "Cite the Evidence" sentence you've ever written in your life. 

 

Optional Sentence Frames:

I'm not giving you sentence frames for this. You have all of the examples above. 

 

Las Ciruelas (8)

Discussion Questions: 

• Let's talk about mistakes. What happens in this chapter that is really challenging for Esperanza with the children? What doesn't go well? How does she face this challenge?
• Dust Storms. What are they? Why are they dangerous?
• Irene says "there are not many doctors who will come out here" (Ryan 155). Why do you think that is?

 

Extra time?

Go do typing. Go check your missing assignments. 

Watch this video. (Seriously. You need to watch this video.)

 

September 28-29: Los Melones and Las Cebollas and EEE of RACE!

Today's Goal: 

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RL.6.1
Cite textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.

Today's Agenda:

1. Entrance Question in the Chat: If you had to choose, sunrises or sunsets? Why?
2. Announcements/Screencast Overview
3. Esperanza Rising Chapter - Los Melones (5)
4. Esperanza Rising Chapter - Las Cebollas (6)
5. Writing Task: RACE Paragraph with focus on EEE using the chapter titled "Las Cebollas"

 

End of Class Checklist (Did I finish these things?):

• Daily Exit Form
• CLICK HERE for the WHOLE BOOK of Esperanza Rising. Having the whole book will be helpful, I promise
• "Las Cebollas" RACE Paragraph
• Typing.com - did you sign up? I am missing a little less than half of my students.
  • Click here to join (Links to an external site.) - you MUST use your school google account to sign in. DO NOT type a username and password. NO TYPING. Just click "Sign in with Google."
  • Here is a breakdown of lessons to complete each week (Links to an external site.). Here's this week's:
    
    • • Beginner Review 1
      • T, S, and L Keys
      • O, B, and A Keys

 

Screencast Overview:

 

Los Melones (5)

(Audio on Canvas)

Discussion Questions: 

• Why doesn't Esperanza like Marta?
• Why is the camp structured so that people of different nationalities are separate?
• What does it mean to strike?

 

Las Cebollas (6)

(Audio on Canvas)

Discussion Questions: 

• Esperanza is really struggling in this chapter with a number of things. What is she struggling to do? Why? How does she overcome these challenges?
• What is different for Esperanza? 

 

Today's Writing Task:

Click Here to go to the Assignment.

Today you will continue practicing writing RACE paragraphs, but today I want you to focus your energy on the EEE in RACE. 

The EE is VERY important because it is the place where you really do the analysis to show your thinking. The goal is to expand upon what is in the quote and explain MORE than what is there. 

 

Here is the question you will answer:

What is one new experience that Esperanza struggles with in "Las Cebollas," and how does she overcome those struggles?

In your answer, you must put the WHOLE paragraph, but what I am grading is the EE. 

You have two options: 

1. you can write your own paragraph with your own answer and evidence (this is a great choice if you really want to show off and push yourself)
   
   
2. You can use the sentence frames below and copy and paste them into your answer box. You must fill in the last part of the paragraph, and it must be AT LEAST TWO SENTENCES, but maybe more.

 

Optional Sentence Frames:

(You can literally copy and paste these, but you have to fill in the rest with lots of detail.)

     One new experience that Esperanza struggles with in her new home is completing simple cleaning tasks, such as washing clothes and sweeping. After Isabel shows her how to wash the clothes, Isabel asks Esperanza if she can sweep and Esperanza lies when she says, "'Of Course,' said Esperanza. She had seen people sweep many times. Many, many times, she assured herself. Besides, she was already too embarrassed about the washing to admit anything else to Isabel" (Ryan 115-116). This is a significant moment because _____________. (You need two or more sentences. Why is this significant? What happens? What does Esperanza realize at this moment? What does she do next and why?)

 

Extra time?

Go do typing. Go check your missing assignments. 

Watch this video. (Seriously. You need to watch this video.)

 

 

September 24-25: Gathering Evidence

 Today's Goal: 

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RL.6.1
Cite textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.

Today's Agenda:

1. Entrance Question in the Chat: What’s the best skittle flavor? (Orange. The answer is orange.)
2. Esperanza Rising Reading Assessment (Quiz)
3. Finish "Las Guayabas"
4. Gathering Evidence from the first four chapters of Esperanza Rising
5. Grades and what they mean.
6. Extra work time if available

 

End of Class Checklist (Did I finish these things?):

• Daily Exit Form
• Esperanza Rising Reading Assessment
• Gathering Evidence Google Form
• Typing.com - did you sign up? I am missing a little less than half of my students.
  • Click here to join (Links to an external site.) - you MUST use your school google account to sign in. DO NOT type a username and password. NO TYPING. Just click "Sign in with Google."
  • Here is a breakdown of lessons to complete each week (Links to an external site.). Here's this week's:
    
    • • J, F, and Space
      • U, R, and K Keys
      • D, E, and I Keys
      • C, G, and N Keys

 

Screencast Overview:

 

Esperanza Rising Reading Assessment

You will find an assignment with this title on the modules page. There is a Google Form embedded into the directions. All you have to do is complete the google form right there and submit it. If for some reason it does not work, here is a link. It is four multiple choice questions. It will tell you if you got the answers correct right away. You will not be able to start until I tell you the "code" to put on the first page. This is how I know if you are here and paying attention.

Las Guayabas
Let's finish!

 

Gathering Evidence from the first four chapters of Esperanza Rising

Today we practice gathering quotes and putting them into sentences. This is the C in RACE that we need to keep practicing and practicing and practicing and getting SO GOOD AT.

Here's a reminder about C:

 

CLICK HERE for the Google Form you are going to fill out today. While you may work with others, you must submit your own.

 

Grades and What They Mean

Watch this video:

 

Extra time? 
Go do typing. Go check your missing assignments. 

 

Esperanza Rising: Los Higos and Las Guayabas

Today's Goal: 

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RL.6.1
Cite textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RL.6.3
Describe how a particular story's or drama's plot unfolds in a series of episodes as well as how the characters respond or change as the plot moves toward a resolution.

Today's Agenda:

1. Entrance Question in the Chat: What is the ONE SMELL you’d smell for the rest of your life?
2. Breakout Rooms: Esperanza's abuelita says "Do not be afraid to start over" when she is teaching Esperanza how to crochet (Ryan 15). What is something you've had to stop and start over when you were learning how to do it?
3. Esperanza Rising "Los Higos"
4. Breakout Rooms: Esperanza's family has made some important decisions in "Los Higos." What decisions have they made? Why? How does Esperanza feel?
5. Break!
6. Esperanza Rising "Las Guayabas"
7. Breakout Rooms: Find one piece of evidence that demonstrates the way Esperanza is acting and how she sees herself as "different" from the people around her.

 

End of Class Checklist (Did I finish these things?):

• Daily Exit Form
• Typing.com - did you sign up? I am missing a little less than half of my students.
  • Click here to join - you MUST use your school google account to sign in. DO NOT type a username and password. NO TYPING. Just click "Sign in with Google."
  • Here is a breakdown of lessons to complete each week. Here's this week's:
    
    • J, F, and Space
    • U, R, and K Keys
    • D, E, and I Keys
    • C, G, and N Keys
• Make sure you are all caught up on Esperanza Rising by next class! There's a more-than-likely chance that I'll be giving you a short reading quiz to check for your understanding. 

 

Esperanza Rising

 

Loom Videos.

 

These are the questions we'll be discussing together as a class today:

• Esperanza's abuelita says "Do not be afraid to start over" when she is teaching Esperanza how to crochet (Ryan 15). What is something you've had to stop and start over when you were learning how to do it?
• Esperanza's family has made some important decisions in "Los Higos." What decisions have they made? Why? How does Esperanza feel?
• Find one piece of evidence that demonstrates the way Esperanza is acting and how she sees herself as "different" from the people around her.
• How do you think Esperanza's life might change in the future? What might happen next?

Esperanza Rising Chapter 2: Las Papayas

Today's Goal: CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RL.6.2
Determine a theme or central idea of a text and how it is conveyed through particular details; provide a summary of the text distinct from personal opinions or judgments.

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.6.6
Use technology, including the Internet, to produce and publish writing as well as to interact and collaborate with others; demonstrate sufficient command of keyboarding skills to type

Today's Agenda:

1. Entrance Question in the Chat: No hay rosa sin espinas. “There is no rose without thorns” (Ryan 14). What does this phrase mean to you?
2. Typing.com Intro REAL QUICK
3. Small Groups to work on previous assignments
4. Esperanza Rising Chapter 2: "Las Papayas"

End of Class Checklist (Did I finish these things?):

• Daily Exit Form
• Triple check that all 3 assignments you have been assigned have been completed. Visit the "Today's Tasks" pages to find the directions if you don't remember what to do.
• 1. R.A. Discussion Board Questions
• 2. RACE Paragraph about "The Fun They Had"
• 3. Summary of Esperanza Rising chapter titled "Las Uvas"
  
• Join Typing.com
• Lessons 1-4 due Friday, September 25!
• Your overall assignment is to complete the beginning and intermediate levels by the end of the quarter! We will give you a schedule next week!

Small Group Work Time

Ms. Black is going to put you in a breakout room. That breakout room has a very specific purpose. 

Here are the things that you are going to do. It will happen in this order. You will notice that the first three things are PAST assignments. That's because you're going to TRIPLE CHECK that you did each task before you move on to the next thing.

• 1. R.A. Discussion Board Questions
• 2. RACE Paragraph about "The Fun They Had"
• 3. Summary of Esperanza Rising chapter titled "Las Uvas"
• 4. Join Typing.com and work on the lessons (See video below)

Typing.com

Watch this screencast:

Here's how to join:

1. Watch the screencast video above. It's 4 minutes.
2. Click here to join
3. Click "Sign up with a new account"
4. Click "Sign in with Google" (DO NOT type anything in.)
5. Start the beginner levels! (Try to do the first four or five this week!)

Esperanza Rising "Las Papayas"

Starting Esperanza Rising and Writing Objective Summaries

Today's Goal: CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RL.6.2
Determine a theme or central idea of a text and how it is conveyed through particular details; provide a summary of the text distinct from personal opinions or judgments.

Today's Agenda:

1. Entrance Question in the Chat: What is one thing you do to make yourself feel better when 
2. Social Contract Question #3: When we are facing difficult situations in Language Arts class, what are the strategies that will help us to solve the problem or get support?
3. Read Esperanza Rising Chapter One: "Las Uvas"
4. Objective Summaries!
5. Catch Up Time!

End of Class Checklist (Did I finish these things?):

• Daily Exit Form
• Read Esperanza Rising Chapter 1: "Las Uvas"
• Watch the screencast about "Objective Summaries"
• Write my 3 sentence summary of "Las Uvas"
  
• Make sure your previous assignments are done (R.A. Practice and "The Fun They Had" RACE Paragraph)

HOMEWORK INVOLVING YOUR GROWNUPS:

• Please ask your grown ups if they did the homework I asked them to complete last Friday. I sent them an email through Canvas, so if they didn't get the email, they can check the Canvas inbox. (YES I gave your grownups homework. It was to fill out this form. Can you ask them if they got my emails?)
• You AND your grownups also got an email last night through Canvas asking you about 

Social Contract Question #3

So far we have answered the following together:

1. What can Ms. Black do this year to show that she respects you and everyone in the classroom?
2. What can YOU do to show Ms. Black and your peers respect in the classroom?

Today we do our last question!

• When we are facing difficult situations in Language Arts class, what are the strategies that will help us to solve the problem or get support?

"Difficult Situations" could mean:

• "I'm very confused"
• "I don't know where to go"
• "Technology hates me today"
• "I couldn't hear the directions"
• "My sibling was being really loud and I got distracted"
• "We are trying to work together but ___ is happening"
• "I didn't do very well on this assignment and I want to do better"
• "I didn't have enough time to complete my work today"
• AND SO MANY OTHER THINGS.

Esperanza Rising

We're going to start a book today! You haven't gone to the library to check the book out, but that's okay, we have a copy for you. You will find a link 

If you want to get a book from school, please make sure you talk to your grownups about the homework listed above OR on the "end of class checklist page" in Modules. I sent you a message in Canvas yesterday afternoon.

Prologue:

"Las Uvas" (Chapter One): 

Summarizing

The only thing you have to do for writing practice today is write an OBJECTIVE summary. You have done summarizing before in your life. I guarantee you have. Remember when you watched an episode of a show and your friend asked you to tell them what happened? Remember when you got home from school and your grownups asked you what you did that day at school? Or how about the time when you explained your favorite tiktok video to your bestie? We have all summarized before.

What is the difference between a summary and a RACE Paragraph?

A RACE Paragraph:

• Answers a question
• Uses a quote from the text
• involves explaining what it means (this is called analysis)

An Objective Summary:

• tells the most important things that happened
• does NOT include personal opinions
• is specific, but doesn't explain every single thing that happened (try to identify the KEY things that happened, maybe 3 or 4 things)

Think of it like a list: First, ____. Then, _________. After that, ________. Finally, _______

That is one way of writing a summary. There are LOTS of ways of writing a summary, but the goal is to only explain the most important things that happened and to avoid sharing your opinion.

YOUR ASSIGNMENT:
You will write a summary of "Las Uvas". It should be 3-5 sentences because you want to make sure to be specific, but you also want to make sure not to explain absolutely every little detail. 

You will find the assignment in Canvas. 

Here's a good sentence starter to put at the beginning of your summary: 

In Esperanza Rising by Pam Muñoz Ryan, the first chapter, "Las Uvas", begins in 1930 when __________________. 

We will have more time at the end of class after this. You should use it to go back and make sure that your R.A. Discussion questions are submitted, and that your RACE paragraph from last class is submitted and complete. 

"The Fun They Had" by Isaac Asimov and Your First RACEEE Paragraph

Today's Goal: 

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RL.6.1
Cite textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.

Today's Agenda:

1. Entrance Question in the Zoom Chat: Who is your favorite person and why? Can you use RA to answer, please?
2. Social Contract Question #2: What can YOU do to show Ms. Black and your peers respect in the classroom?
3. The Fun They Had by Isaac Asimov (1951)
4. C.E. of RACE
5. RACE Paragraph Response 

End of Class Checklist (Did I finish these things?):

• Daily Exit Form
• RACE Paragraph

The Fun They Had by Isaac Asimov

While we read this, there are a couple things you need to know and a couple things you need to look for.

What you need to know:

• This story was written in 1951. It is science-fiction!
• The story takes place in year 2155.
• In the story, it talks about a "slot" where the characters put their homework using a punch code to write out answers. In this story, that's the same as Google Classroom or Canvas, where you turn in your work.

What you need to look for:

• How does school in 2020 compare to school in 2155? What is similar? 
• We will need at least one piece of EVIDENCE to use to prove the similarities we talk about.

CLICK HERE for the text! 

C and E of RACE!

We have already talked about R and A together! I will be responding to your posts this week, and I will be responding both with general responses and also feedback! You should DEFINITELY take a look so that you can learn and improve! 

BUT WHAT ABOUT C AND E!?

It's cool I got you covered. 

C stands for "Cite the Evidence" and it's maybe the most important new skill we're going to practice together this year. It is ONE sentence that means you are going to copy a quote from the text and provide an in-text citation. An in-text citation is what you put at the end of a quote to prove where the quote came from. 

Here is what it looks like. It has a VERY specific format!

Every C sentences has THREE PARTS:

1. Introductory Phrase
   examples:
         The author writes, 
         Asimov states,
         Margie says, 
         The writer explains that
         
2. The Quote
         The quote has to be EXACTLY as written in the text
         The quote has to have quotation marks around it
   
   
3. In-text Citation
         You put the author's LAST name (capitalize it) and the page number in parentheses. JUST a number. Do not write the word "page" or "pg" or "#". Then you put the period at the VERY END of the sentence.  
   
   (Bradbury 34)
   (Pilkey 97)
   (Cameron 123)

Examples:

At the end of the chapter, Rowling writes, "All was well" (Rowling 759). 

The author finishes the chapter by stating that "All was well" (Rowling 759).

E Is your EXPLANATION of the quote.

It must be TWO sentences or MORE. 

Ms. Black will often call them RACEEEEEE paragraphs instead of RACE paragraphs to remind you that E needs to be the biggest part of your response. RA is one sentence. C is one sentence. EEEE is two or three or four. That means when you write your response, MOST of the response will be the Explanation part. 

It's VERY important. The point of explaining is show that you can show your thinking and prove that the evidence is significant. 

You can start your explanation with some of these sentence starters:

• This is significant because ___
• This moment demonstrates a similarity to 2020 because ___
• When __ says this, they mean ___
• The text proves that _____

"The Fun They Had" RACE Paragraph:

You're going to write your first RACEEE paragraph for Language Arts today! 

Here is the question you will answer: 

After reading "The Fun They Had" by Isaac Asimov, how is school in 2155 similar to school in 2020? 

You will write a RACEE paragraph response for this! 

Here are some sentence frames that might help:

    After reading "The Fun They Had" by Isaac Asimov, school in 2155 is similar to school in 2020 because ______________. In the story, Asimov writes, "_____________" (_______). This moment demonstrates a similarity to 2020 because _________. (then add 1-2 more sentences to talk about it.)

How will this be scored? 

We are looking for TWO things:

1. Did you do ALL FOUR parts of RACE?
2. Is your C sentence correct?

Social Contract and RA Practice

Today's Goal: 

• ELA-LITERACY.W.6.1.A
  Introduce claim(s) and organize the reasons and evidence clearly.
• ELA-LITERACY.W.6.1.D
  Establish and maintain a formal style.
• Begin to create our classroom social contract

Today's Agenda:

1. Entrance Question in the Chat: What's the best kids cartoon show? Why?
2. Breakout Room Activity / Classroom Social Contract
3. R.A.C.E. Paragraphs Introduction
4. RA Practice
5. Letter to Ms. Black? I don't know if we're going to do this. We will find out together.
6. Daily Exit Form
7. Asynchronous Work Time

End of Class Checklist (Did I finish these things?):

• Daily Exit Form
• Respond to TWO (there are 3 options) discussion board questions using the R.A. writing strategy. 

Breakout Room Activity

For today's whole class activity, you will be getting sorted into RANDOM groups! You may or may not know these people. If you do not, you will need to introduce yourself! Make sure you know each other's names, please!

Together, your task will be to try to find TEN things that you all have in common. It can be about anything! Your life. Your interests. Your goals. Your Favorites. Things you DON'T like! It might be hard! That's okay. That's the point. Here is a list of things you could try to talk about: 

• Basic life data: age, school, height, siblings, location, what month you were born in
• Things you like or dislike: food, show, movie, book, music, color, restaurants, season, etc.
• Hobbies and activities you participate in
• Goals for the future

It means speaking with your team and communicating! Also notice that there is a difference between "all of us have the same FAVORITE food" and "all of us really LIKE this food." You might have to look for things that are in the second category and that's okay!

We will come back together after 5-10 minutes and chat!

THEN We will go back to our rooms again and your goal is going to be to come up with TWO answers to the following question:

What can Ms. Black do this year to show that she respects you and everyone in the classroom?

We have THREE questions to talk about, but we're only going to do one at a time. By the time we are done, we will have some goals and expectations that we have created for ourselves. I will ask EVERY group to share the two things they came up with. 

R.A.C.E. Writing Strategy

RACE is a writing strategy we use at TPMS in almost ALL of our classes. The goal is to help create complete, clear sentences and to write with more detail. Knowing these four letters and what they mean will help your writing in EVERY class I promise!

I got you this video:

I also got you this picture:

We are only going to focus on R and A today, which means successfully doing our classwork today means being able to answer a question in one complete sentence. 

I know this is something you are capable of doing! 

You have to do both parts though. 

Here is an example:

What is the best children's television show and why? 

To answer this using the RA strategy, you cannot write:

• Phineas and Ferb.
• It's Phineas and Ferb.
• I think it's Phineas and Ferb.
• I don't know.

The first three had an answer, but they did not have the R in RACE. The last one isn't an answer at all! Sometimes even if you aren't sure, the best option is to come up with something anyway. I believe in you! None of them explain why, which is part of the question!

Also we are going to practice REMOVING the words "I think" from our writing this year. I know it's what you think because you wrote it! Formal academic writing means that you don't have to state the words "I think." Sometimes it's valuable, but we're going to practice writing without it in our class this year! I will tell you when you can use the words "I think."

To restate the question, you can write: 

• The best children's television show is ____ because ___. 
• A really excellent children's show that everyone should watch is ____ because __

There aren't a lot of options here. To restate, you take the question and turn it into a statement. 

Your goal today is going to be to go to the discussion boards on Canvas. There are THREE discussion board options to choose from. You must complete TWO of them. 

RUBRICS and GRADES

This is your first assignment that will receive a SCORE. All of the assignments in our class that receive scores will be scored on a Four point scale.

It looks like this: 

A "passing" score is a 2.5. For this assignment, it means you wrote in complete sentences and you answered the questions using the RA strategy. "Competency" means that you met standards!

To get a higher score, you will be detailed in your answer and make sure to include the reason. It doesn't mean writing more sentences; rather, it might mean writing a more specific sentence and reason. 

To get a lower score, you may have only done one of the two pieces of RA, or you may have not written a complete sentence, or you may have some spelling/grammar mistakes that you can fix. 

If you do not like the score you receive, you will ALWAYS be able to revise work in this class.